I would cool the supporting type down. Too many things going on. The vertical card has Smith in caps big and bold and with shadow – I think it's too many special effects. The horizontal cards seem easier to rectify for the time being. I think I would only have colour on the Colorplan/Student Edition type and have the rest white out. I would leave the GF Smith out as you have it in the contact address. I don't know what the size of the small type is but maybe it could go smaller and then everything run ranged left under Colorplan.
Is the small type the same size? If it's not the difference is so slight i would make it the same size (the smaller of the two sizes). I might also look at the bold caps a bit smaller and try a version where they are tracked out a bit. keep the originals up but show the development work
I would cool the supporting type down. Too many things going on. The vertical card has Smith in caps big and bold and with shadow – I think it's too many special effects. The horizontal cards seem easier to rectify for the time being. I think I would only have colour on the Colorplan/Student Edition type and have the rest white out. I would leave the GF Smith out as you have it in the contact address. I don't know what the size of the small type is but maybe it could go smaller and then everything run ranged left under Colorplan.
ReplyDeleteIs the small type the same size? If it's not the difference is so slight i would make it the same size (the smaller of the two sizes). I might also look at the bold caps a bit smaller and try a version where they are tracked out a bit. keep the originals up but show the development work
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